Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Jigsaw - Mag 54


If only
The
pieces fitted.
If only
The
Poem rhymed.
Then I'd know
Where I was
Going.
And time
Would be
Mine.

13 comments:

spacedlaw said...

Time is yours, still. Nice poem.

Martin H. said...

Nothing eats up the time, like a good puzzle. Nice one.

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Tumblewords: said...

Oh, yes! How true...

gautami tripathy said...

So true!

scattered with the wind

Tess Kincaid said...

Ah, the illusiveness of time.

Trellissimo said...

You made me smile with this one!

Kristen Haskell said...

Time - what is time? and posted at 3:21 am I'd say you are doing just fine!

Mary said...

If only...wouldn't that be grand!

Bee's Blog said...

A wonderful take on the Mag. How many times do we say 'f only'?.............

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Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

if only.
let your if be true..
lovely magpie.

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azfree said...

Reminds me of writer's block, but in this case the outcome is a completed puzzle!

1meremortal said...

Very nice indeed...thank you for sharing.