I think that's well done. The "who" of the third line invites me to think of kindness itself or some other "who." The image is great, too.
I struggled with this prompt, too. You nailed it in an interesting way.
Oh, spectacular - I think we've all been there - probably on both sides! Love this one!
i am so glad you gave it a go! kindness is a lamp to our paths & you have captured that so beautifully
I think you did a great job. We all have had kindness help us along.
krissie...did i spell that right... it is a beautiful photo and insightful ku.. thank you..
Great haiga. I am a sucker for those!Can it get any worse than this?
Wonderful haiga. What echoes in this poem!
strangers who saw anddidn’t look the other waypointed the way backHugs and blessings,
Lovely fusion of words with a stunning and very appropriate photo.
if you love tea pots, please see our new blog,,,kate
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I think that's well done. The "who" of the third line invites me to think of kindness itself or some other "who." The image is great, too.
I struggled with this prompt, too. You nailed it in an interesting way.
Oh, spectacular - I think we've all been there - probably on both sides! Love this one!
i am so glad you gave it a go! kindness is a lamp to our paths & you have captured that so beautifully
I think you did a great job. We all have had kindness help us along.
krissie...did i spell that right... it is a beautiful photo and insightful ku.. thank you..
Great haiga. I am a sucker for those!
Can it get any worse than this?
Wonderful haiga. What echoes in this poem!
strangers who saw and
didn’t look the other way
pointed the way back
Hugs and blessings,
Lovely fusion of words with a stunning and very appropriate photo.
if you love tea pots, please see our new blog,,,kate
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