I found change a difficult topic and reading through the entries of others, I am sticking with just two of mine today.
Silent snowfall
paints change
through the window.
Loose change
pocketful of smiles
and the open road.
Thanks for viewing.
Tuesday, March 4, 2008
One Single Impression - Challenge - 'Change'
I am thrilled to bits that One deep Breath is continuing in our new meeting place of - One Single Impression. Kudos to the ladies who have taken on this challenge, much to the relief of the regular 'haiku-ers if there is such a word...lol.
I found change a difficult topic and reading through the entries of others, I am sticking with just two of mine today.
Loose change
I found change a difficult topic and reading through the entries of others, I am sticking with just two of mine today.
Loose change
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I like these very much. Snow as paint that changes everything is an image that sure speaks to me!
Writing in Faith: Poems
Snow definitely changes a landscape in a hurry and quite dramatically. Should I see irony in an Aussie writing this one?
Love these - the second one fires my wanderlust! Ten feet of snow this winter dulled my enthusiasm for silent snow! Grin. Nicely done!!
I love the images in both of these: the beauty of the snow; the fun of the pocket change. Both are so true and both are written so beautifully.
My "Change" is here. Thank you!
I am going to add you to the blogroll, OK?
duh
I already did!
Sorry!
I really like your second haiku.
FYI, there is a Japanese term for writers of haiku I've seen used occasionally:
haijin [meaning writers of haiku-related literature]
I love the image in the first one and the second one makes me waht to travel!
your kuz portray a beautiful picture of hope...
your 2nd speaks to my wanderlust! both are gorgeous!
I enjoyed this a lot.
thanks for your comments - it's just a photo with digital camera that I played around with in photoshop. - I love your poems - very talented.
I love both of these--they're very well done.
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